Incredibly.

How incredibly,

Transparently,

lacking in activity,

honest creativity,

how obviously,

attention hungry, 

for sympathy,

and comforting, 

the familiar retreat,

to the military,

all the online freaks,

come to the pity party,

that is, apparently, 

the brand new trendy,

recovery  thing,

held at your address daily,

carried out blindly and gaily,

with what you call sincerity,

such a dull redundancy,

the unpaid toll of mediocrity,

isnt at all earned honestly.

6 thoughts on “Incredibly.

  1. Rita says:

    Damn, this is good. You amaze me, AJ.

  2. Such a marvelous piece of art with such amazing flow. Thank you for sharing your gift with all of us

  3. mihrank says:

    this is such incredible and fascinating words…

  4. Ward Clever says:

    No one should feel sorry for you, because you are a warrior and a survivor. Instead, they should feel happy for you because of what you’ve accomplished, what you’ve endured and how much stronger you are now.. 🙂